Research Question
Why should steroids not be allowed in professional sports? What makes steroids so beneficial and harmful?
Claim
Steroids should not be allowed in any aspect of sports, especially professional sports because of the edge it gives you. Steroids should not be used because after using them there is many health issues that follow.
Reasons
1. Steroids is not a safe way to exceed in sports, due to the regulations and laws against steroids in sports.
2. Steroids are used by people trying to get an edge on everyone else, this is the fastest way of cheating others and your own health.
3. The health issues that come with steroids are tremendous, and very dangerous to the human body.
4. There needs to be more testing and laws against steroids in sports, and a severe punishment on the users.
Thesis Statement
The use of steroids by adults in sports should not be accepted. Athletes need to be tested more often and have stronger punishment for using performance enhancing drugs.
Be sure you include the reasons behind your claim in your thesis so it provides a blueprint for your paper.
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